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2016年瑞安市高一英语现场作文赛优秀作文选集

瑞安市教师发展中心 汇编 2016.6

按:为夯实学生的语言基础,发展语言运用能力,培养学生用英语分析问题和解决问题能力以及批判性思维,我市于20165举行了瑞安市第十二届高中生英语现场作文赛,比赛包括“读后续写”和“概要写作”两部分。现将一等奖优秀作文汇编,共广大师生学习参考。

第一部分 现场作文题及参考答案

I. 读后续写 (50%)

阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

One spring summer I was walking inParis. At a shop I looked into the window, and then began to walk again. Suddenly a pretty young lady stopped me and talked to me in English, “Excuse me, but your coat is dirty. You have white spots on your back.”

“How could it be?” I was surprised. “This is a new coat.”

“But I see some white spots on your back,” she insisted. “Someone must have thrown paste(糊状物) at you. I think I can get rid of them.” She began to pull a handkerchief out of her handbag. “Take off your coat right now. I will clean your coat. Oh, this is terrible.” Her voice was so sweet and she looked sincere.

How could I possibly refuse such a nice offer? I believed her and took off my coat. It was really spotted. I handed it to her gratefully. The young lady was smiling at me. Her blue eyes shined charmingly. It soiled(弄脏)two of her handkerchiefs to make my coat clean again. I was so grateful and decided to invite her for a drink or something.

“Thank you so much. It’s really nice of you to do so…”I was about to express my gratitude and invitation.

“Don’t mention it.” The lady interrupted me and hurried away.

I hadn’t asked for her name or even said goodbye. Looking at her graceful back, I was a little disappointed. I put on my coat slowly. However, when I reached my pocket, I was frozen. My wallet with my credit cards and money was gone. All of sudden, I understood the whole thing and my heart sunk. That pretty woman was actually a pickpocket. I was so regretted to believe her. Her beautiful appearance cheated my eyes and my heart as well.

Three months later, I was taking pictures in the beautiful city ofAlexandriainEgypt. A girl came up to me, asking me to see what was wrong with her camera.

注意:

  1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

  2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

  3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

  4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

     “Another young girl!” The smiling face of the pretty lady in Paris emerged(浮现) in front of me.                                                                      

                                                                                

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Fortunately, I caught up with the girl.                                                                              

                                                                                 

II. 概要写作 (50%)

阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

In recent years many countries of the world have been faced with the problem of how to make their workers more productive(多产的). Some experts claim the answer is to make jobs more varied. But do more varied jobs lead to greater productivity? There is evidence to suggest that while variety certainly makes the worker’s life more enjoyable, it does not actually make him work harder. As far as increasing productivity is concerned, then, variety is not an important factor.

Other experts feel that giving the worker’s freedom to do his job in his own way is important, and there is no doubt that this is true. The problem is that this kind of freedom cannot easily be given in the modern factory with its complicated machinery which must be used in a fixed way. Thus while freedom of choice may be important, there is usually very little that can be done to create it.

Another important consideration is how much each worker contributes to the product he is making. In most factories the worker sees only one small part of the product. Some car factories are now experimenting with having many small production lines rather than one large one, so that each worker contributes more to the production of the cars on his line. It would seem that not only is degree of worker contribution an important factor, therefore, but it is also one we can do something about.

To what extent does more money lead to greater productivity? The workers themselves certainly think this is important. But perhaps they want more money only because the work they do is so boring. Money just lets them enjoy their spare time more. A similar argument may explain demands for shorter working hours. Perhaps if we succeed in making their jobs more interesting, they will neither want more money, nor will shorter working hours be so important to them.

   “概要写作”参考答案:Job variety makes life more enjoyable, but does not increase productivity. Freedom is also an important factor, though little can be cone to create it. Something can be done to increase worker contribution, and this is an important factor. The workers themselves consider money and working hours important, but if their fobs were more interesting, perhaps the workers would no longer want these. (63)

第二部分 优秀作文汇编

一、瑞安中学 谢惊鸿(指导师:华凌)

 1.读后续写

 “Another young girl!” The smiling face of the pretty lady inParisemerged in front of me. The experience about the young lady three mouths ago aroused my anger so I shook my head impatiently. The girl continued to ask passers–by for help anxiously but nobody was willing to give a hand. Maybe she really needed help, I felt a little guilty. It was already noon so I went to a restaurant. But when I reached my pocket, I found my wallet was gone! The atmosphere seemed to be frozen. Suddenly, a sweet voice called me. It was the girl with the camera. She took my wallet from her handbag and explained that she saw it on the ground and then managed to find me. I was deeply moved and wanted to thank her but she had left. So I hurried outside.

Fortunately, I caught up with the girl. She turned around, wearing a smile. I sincerely expressed my thanks to her and told her that I admired her kindness and honesty. Then I helped her fixed up her camera in return. It was a memorable and valuable experience for us, confirming that there was always warmth and honesty in the world.

2. 概要写作

To create more productivity, some ways are given. First, some experts suggest making jobs more varied. But it’s proved that the variety of jobs isn’t important. Second, giving the worker’s freedom to do his job has an effect. But it can’t be easy. Third, we can increase the degree of worker contribution, which is more practical. Fourth, workers think more money and shorter working hours are necessary. Perhaps making their jobs more interesting is what we really need to do.

二、瑞安十中 黄小萌 (指导师:蔡秀盈)

1. 读后续写

“Another young girl!” The smiling face of the pretty lady in Paris emerged(浮现) in front of me. The terrible experience inParisthree months ago left a deep impression on me. And now the girls who had a beautiful appearance asked for my help. “I can’t be cheated by the girl.” I warned myself. So I refused her at once. She looked disappointed and then moved off. The girl stopped in front of a pink flower. And she stared at the lovely flower for a long time as if she was fond of it. This small activity touched my heart softly. “She is a child and just wants to take a photo. Why not help her?” I thought.

Fortunately, I caught up with the girl. I appreciated her and helped her fix up the camera. The girl burst out laughing and was grateful to my kindness. “Thank you, sir. The flower is so pretty that I long for taking a photo of it.” She gave me a big smile which was like the sunshine. And now my heart was full of warmness and happiness. To her satisfaction, she took photos and then went away. At last, I reached my pocket and found the wallet was still in it. To my relief, the girl was not a thief. Thus I know that there are many kinds of people in the world. Only if we trust each other will the world be better.

        2. 概要写作

There are many ways to solve the problem of how to make the workers more active in producing. First, making jobs more varied is proved that it’s useless. And the factories have difficulty in giving workers with freedom. Though it’s a good idea. What’s more, the factories can take activities to make them contribute more to the production. And only if their jobs become more interesting can workers work together.

三、塘下中学 刘雅诗(指导师:徐月形)

1. 读后续写

 “Another young girl!” The smiling face of the pretty lady inParisemerged in front of me. Thinking of how my wallet was stolen three months ago, I stood there, wondering whether to help her. “What if this girl, like the young lady inParis, turned out to be a pickpocket?” I thought. “Sir, could you please help me with my camera?” she asked sincerely again in a very sweet voice. But being afraid of being cheated by the beautiful appearance, I eventually refused her. The girl went off, feeling very depressed. However, the minute she left, I felt so regretted that I ran towards her hurriedly.

Fortunately, I caught up with the girl. She was still examining the camera with an anxious expression. “Excuse me, can I help you?” I asked. Having recognized who I was, she felt very surprised but happy. After my several attempts, the camera began to work again. The girl expressed her great gratitude for my kindness. To my great relief, after learning the reason for my first refusal, the girl not only showed her understanding but also invited me to enjoy her pictures she had taken. We talked happily later as if we had been old friends. So ignore the bad experiences and be kind to strangers, which will give you warm on your journey.

2. 概要写作

Recently, for many countries how to make their workers more productive has become a big problem. Experts suggest making jobs more varied or giving the workers freedom, but they are not important or effective enough. Actually, ensuring degree of worker contribution to their own products is an important factor leading to greater productivity. Besides, while the workers expect to get better-paid and demand for shorter working hours, making their jobs more interesting really matters in improving productivity.

四、瑞安中学 欧一鸿(指导师:陈晓静)

1.读后续写

 “Another young girl!” The smiling face of the pretty lady inParisemerged in front of me. This young lady also had a charming appearance. However, what made my heart beat wildly was the same elegant handbag. As she passed me a digital camera, I found her even failed to turn it on. When I was deep in confusion, she suddenly swelled with panic and hurried away.

Fortunately, I caught up with the girl. To my astonishment, she was in company of another girl whom I figured out as the pickpocket inParis. I walked up to them and asked for a reasonable explanation. The girl I had met before exclaimed that what she had done was to help her sister get rid of poverty and ignorance. “My sister is always wondering whether I earn money in a proper way. Now it no longer matters as it’s my last time to be evil. Sir, I beg for your forgiveness.” I took out all the money in my pocket, “Don’t surrender to your fate.” I said before I left. Maybe I was cheated again, but I believed, at that moment, the mankind was reflecting its significant power.

2. 概要写作

The problem of improving efficiency in producing has been put forward. As variety and freedom contribute little to the progress, we should take other factors into account. For instance, it is worthwhile to increase the amount of each worker’s contribution. When it comes to money, we’d rather make the jobs more attractive, so the payment and working hours will be less important.

五、瑞安中学 郑婉(指导师:陈晓静)

1.读后续写

       “Another young girl!” The smiling face of the pretty lady inParisemerged in front of me. My first instinct was to hide my wallet in a more secure place. Then I checked her camera carefully only to find nothing wrong with it. Now I finally believed that the young lady was just another pickpocket who wanted to steal my wallet from my pocket by her attractive appearance. I wouldn’t let myself be cheated again! Just then, she received an urgent call and borrowed a large sum of money from me. Before I could say anything, she had run away without her camera. I dashed off like an arrow to tread on her heels.

Fortunately, I caught up with the girl. She was in a hospital room with her mother who was seriously ill and needed an operation at once. I saw tears rolling down her face. I pulled a handkerchief out of my handbag to wipe her tears. In a trembling voice, she told me that her mother suffered from cancer, for which she had to take some impressive photos with her camera to earn her living and pay for the great expenses. “I can’t express my gratitude to you for lending me the money. I promise I will return it to you in three months.” I couldn’t help blaming myself for how doubtful I was and I gave the camera back to her. “There is still some honesty in this world!” I sighed in relief when I received the money later.

2. 概要写作

    There are different opinions on how to make workers more productive. Some think companies should provide various jobs to make the workers’ life more comfortable. But it doesn’t drive them to work wholeheartedly. Some believe workers should have freedom to do his job, which is unrealistic for modern factories. As the degree of worker contribution is significant, some companies divided large production lines into small ones. Perhaps the radical measure is to make workers’ jobs more interesting.

六、瑞安十中 曹心宜(指导师:金永莉)

1. 读后续写

“Another young girl!” The smiling face of the pretty lady in Paris emerged(浮现) in front of me. Maybe this young lady was also a pickpocket. I must be careful this time. So before checking her camera, I put my wallet in my backpack in case. A few minutes later, I fixed up the camera and returned it to the girl. But she just thanked me simply and hurried away. I had no idea why she was in such a hurry. Feeling puzzled, I reached my backpack and my heart sunk for another time. My backpack was opened secretly and my wallet was gone again. I chased after the girl as fast as I could. How could I lose my wallet twice in three months?

Fortunately, I caught up with the girl. I pulled her backpack and shouted for help while she was struggling. Some people realized what was happening and called the police. The police arrived before long and called the police. The police arrived before long and searched the girl’s backpack. As I expected, they found my lost wallet. I had never believed that such pretty ladies were pickpockets. Only after this happened to me did I realize that we must not judge a person by his appearance, or we would found ourselves cheated.

2. 概要写作

Some experts agree that variety can make workers work harder. But in fact, it doesn’t. Other experts believe that allowing the workers to do their jobs freely makes a difference. However, it’s not easy to do so. Another idea is that making each worker focus on a small part of the product is useful. Maybe the workers will also be more productive if their jobs are less boring.

七、瑞安中学 王泺涵(指导师:曾微微)

1. 读后续写

     “Another young girl!” The smiling face of the pretty lady inParisemerged in front of me. Holding on this thought, a plan to punish this pickpocket was made up in my mind. I put my wallet into her pocket with one of my hands while the other hand was checking her camera. The next moment, the camera was struck to the ground with all my strength. Nevertheless, it was my turn to be puzzled that she did not even say anything but ran away. Oughtn’t she to scream and send me to the police? Thus, I would be able to point out that the girl was a pickpocket for my wallet in her pocket. But things were out of my control. There must be something wrong.

     Fortunately, I caught up with the girl. Seeing the helpless tears in her eyes, I could make sure that I was totally wrong. Immediately, I explained all these things. To my surprise, she not only forgave me but also said she was willing to be my friend. And the most fantastic thing was that the wallet which was lost three months before was returned to me by the police when I returned toParis. It had just been found on the road and nothing was stolen. With warmth filled in my heart again, I felt everyone I met in every street had a beautiful appearance, together with a kind heart.

2. 概要写作

Since improving workers’ productivity worries many countries, some measures and factors are given. First of all, variety is obviously useless. Despite the freedom works well, it’s difficult to be free in the modern factory. And some facts reveal that having many small production lines makes contribute more to the product, which is also practical. Eventually, jobs should be more satisfying in order to balance the salary and the working hours.

八、瑞安十中 蔡知整(指导师:梅馨)

1. 读后续写

“Another young girl!” The smiling face of the pretty lady in Paris emerged(浮现) in front of me. And I would never forget what had happened three months ago. I couldn’t believe it impossible that the same thing had happened twice to me. However, I agreed to help her as I wanted to catch the pickpocket all of a sudden. As I was finding out what was wrong with her camera, the girl, who aimed to attach my attention, kept on communicating with me, so that she could steal my wallet easily. On the contrary, it was useless doing these on me because I had known the purpose of the young girl. When I felt something moving in my pocket. I realized that she was about to steal my wallet. As soon as she made it, she began to run away.

Fortunately, I caught up with the girl. And I found my wallet in her handbag. Therefore, I called the police at once so the young lady was punished by law in the end. And the police thanked me a lot for making constructions to catching the pickpocket. After going through these experiences. I understood that judging by people’s appearance was foolish because people with beautiful appearance may tell lies. What we ought to keep in our heart was that no matter how beautiful people were, it was necessary to have a calm mind.

       2. 概要写作

Nowadays, factories have trouble in making workers work hard. It’s proved that variety is not useful. Although making workers free is important, it’s hard to succeed. Letting workers know how much contributions they do to the product is another way. However, it’s not an effective way to give workers more money. Instead, we need to get workers interested in the work so that they will work harder.

 九、瑞安市上海新纪元高级中学 沈洁(指导师:乐胜春)

1. 读后续写

 “Another young girl!” The smiling face of the pretty lady inParisemerged in front of me. Holding her camera, the girl seemed quite anxious. “Excuse me, sir. My camera won’t work. Could you help me?” Her blue eyes stared at me with hope. “She must be pretending to let me check her camera and steal my wallet just like the young lady in Paris. I won’t have her cheating me again!” So I refused her without hesitation. Feeling frustrated, she went away. But an ID card fell out of her handbag. I picked it up and found she was just a person who liked taking pictures. I was so regretted that I ran to the girl at once.

Fortunately, I caught up with the girl. “I’m sorry that I thought you were a pickpocket because I was cheated by a pretty lady who stole my wallet three months ago. I catch up with you because I want to return your ID card and help you check your camera. Can you accept my help?” The girl smiled after hearing my words. Her smile was just like the sunshine, warm and bright.

2. 概要写作

  How can we make workers more productive? Some experts think making jobs more varied is useful, but the evidence proves that it is wrong. Other experts think giving the workers freedom is important but it is difficult to achieve. How to make each worker contribute more to the production is also an important consideration. And the workers themselves think more money is important. Perhaps making their jobs more interesting is the best way.

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